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Jon C-B

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23rd August, 2009 at 22:51:34 -

I'm really loving Fruity Loops 8 demo and this is the only song ive finished and kind of like. Tell me what you think please! http://www.mediafire.com/?wz4dgwgnhe4
Sorry you have to download it I don't know how to do it any other way

 
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23rd August, 2009 at 23:20:02 -

Please don't use media fire. That is so add bogged I almost couldn't find it. Downloading at the moment though. Use the box or some other less add junked site.

 
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23rd August, 2009 at 23:26:23 -

Not bad. While that loud, uh, guitar, bass, square, what is that that starts at 0:27? Anyways, whatever it is, is quite a welcome surprise. Though it is a bit overwhelming. Maybe tone that down a bit? The last part after it though sounds kind of lazy. Maybe some sort of rise and fall in there? Nice little drum jingle at the end though. Nice bass too.

(You may also like LMMS(LinuxMultimediaStudio). It's open-source free, works like FL, and the best part, you can save your work.)

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All platforming problems can be mostly solved here:

http://www.clickteam.com/mbfiles2/277308-engine.zip
http://www.angelfire.com/games5/psywakd/platform.gam
www.zephni.com

These are very excellent examples by other people and are very informative.
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Coming Soon: Diary Of An Indie Developer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XaF6H9MrgH8

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Jon C-B

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24th August, 2009 at 03:19:29 -

Thanks for the suggestion ill check out LMMS tomorrow. is it just for linux though or is that just the name?

 
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25th August, 2009 at 05:10:33 -

Pretty Good if its your first song!

The slightly scratchy square wave was a bit overpowering, and I didn't care much for it's pattern either.
I think it should be toned down as Xhunterko said and make the pattern a little more interesting and catchy.

Also this sounds a bit like every other electronic dance song out there, a little generic.
That doesn't make it bad though. I liked this a lot! Keep it up!

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