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19th November, 2004 at 10:58:01 -

http://www.freewebs.com/jonick/finmusik.mid

This is the start of a litlle theme I made. What do you think of it so far?
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19th November, 2004 at 11:30:33 -

Not bad. Little simplistic for my tastes, but it's a good start.

 
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19th November, 2004 at 15:57:38 -

Sounds like a good theme for a happy platformer.

 
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19th November, 2004 at 21:33:13 -

This midi is well started so far. Your rhythm is simple, but it works well with the style of music you're attempting to emulate. However, the song sounds really empty. You just can't make a tune with only a drum beat and a flute lead, you also need at least a bassline and background chords to add some texture to your song. Some additonal notes or instruments added to the lead instrument would make it sound more alive as well; even though it's not out of place, it's hollow-sounding and somehow unconvincing.

Keep working on it, I'm sure you can do something great out of this tune.

 
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20th November, 2004 at 10:05:05 -

http://w1.922.telia.com/~u92204153/finmusik3.mid

This is how it went. What do you think?

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20th November, 2004 at 13:36:45 -

It sounds okay to me, It seems suited to a small village or something similar.

 
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20th November, 2004 at 15:19:09 -

I think you're getting better at MIDI, the melody's fine but the backing still doesn't sound quite right to me.

 
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20th November, 2004 at 17:57:21 -

WOAH you've got 100s and 100s of tracks on that midi.

 
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20th November, 2004 at 18:24:31 -

Ok, I spent about ten minutes twiddling around with your MIDI, and made a remix Use it if you want

http://www.klikacademy.com/circy/junk/finmusik3.mid

 
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