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23rd July, 2006 at 16:50:47 -

I'd say what it was from; but that's kinda obvious.
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Anyone see anything that looks "off" (Besides the JPG grainyness)?
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23rd July, 2006 at 16:59:58 -

Well if you take it and flip it to make a full image it looks weird. Neck is too small, body is tiny, but the face is the right size. Unless that's what you were going for.

 
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23rd July, 2006 at 17:09:54 -

Oh yea the shoulders need to be bigger

 
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23rd July, 2006 at 17:38:22 -

Looking good

 
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23rd July, 2006 at 17:49:03 -

To me, the eye is too far left. If you picture a mirroed face next to it, the eyes would be too far apart.

Also try a few more styles of shading the hair, i think you could get a better effect on it without too much effort.

Nice work though

 
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23rd July, 2006 at 21:33:55 -

i really like it!! the shape of the eye is realistic .. but why is the eyebrow red??
aside of that i would put some more details on the shirt.. looks a litle flat

 
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23rd July, 2006 at 23:43:48 -

No side of someone's face is the exact same as the other. Maybe raise her eyebrow up and make it longer on the outside though. Cool hair

 
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24th July, 2006 at 04:30:11 -

Maybe she's not meant to be looking at the screen.

 
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24th July, 2006 at 08:31:07 -

That picture is facing slightly to her right, which means the her right eye is slightly skewed.

The hair looks a bit weird near her eye, like it's stuck on.

 
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24th July, 2006 at 12:55:14 -

Its good but yes Jpegs suck,

Any way shoulders need to be bigger

Also to make more realistic pictures:

Heads are Five Eyes wide (Generally)
-An eye in the middle of both the eyes

The mouth is an eye below the nose (Generally)

The Mouth goes from one puple (How ever that is spelled) to the next (Gernerally)

Eyes are the Center of the head

Ears go from The eye Brow to the base of the nose (Generally)

The Noses base is an eye wide (Generally)

So if ya draw this again take a few of those in to thoguht but you did some of them Great job any way, I cannot do lips neerly as good as you

 
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24th July, 2006 at 13:06:13 -

"Eyes are the Center of the head"

Vertically, I assume.

 
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26th July, 2006 at 17:16:32 -

It's not supposed to be a mirrored image.

 
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26th July, 2006 at 17:37:39 -

I could've sworn i posted something about it possibly being used at the right of the screen to give a more dramatic effect. Like they do on them silly japanese cartoons when there's a conflict of sorts.

 
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26th July, 2006 at 20:53:30 -

Either the head's too big or the rest of her's too small, but it looks pretty good.

 
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4th August, 2006 at 16:44:22 -

Nice! really nice work i'd say

 
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