DaVince This fool just HAD to have a custom rating
Registered 04/09/2004
Points 7998
30th September, 2007 at 06:27:27 -
To be honest, I don't really like it. Not much humour, not much drawn. Also keep in mind that a webcomic will likely be long-term, so you'd need to be consistent somehow and yet introduce change over time. I don't really see it happening with this comic (except "hey look, a new character. Where did he come from?").
ok, so that's 2 for, 2 against... I think I may put up a few more later. I've got loads of them stashed in a folder somewhere around on my HD. I'll just have to remember where I stashed the folder...
I'd say you should have more characters, and they should have more personality. Also I think you should draw all the pictures from scratch, not just copy the same like you did two times in the later comic
Also, you could create some better plot to the first comic. The pen idea is cool, but maybe something else than just 'yup'?
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