Hey Check out my logos. The first one is for the project game I had put up today. The second one is the Logo for my game creation program I have at a local community center. Let me know what you think.
EDIT: If anyone likes these and would like me to make a logo for them, just let me know. I need more work for my portfolio.
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I don't like the placement of the 2nd line on the first pic. The M is in too much of an awkward place.
Second ones pretty good! Maybe not keen on the typeface, perhaps bring the gaps closer together? It's as if the G is a seperate font altogether (but I love that spazzy gamey explosion coming from it!).
I kinda thought that too. So I decided to change it. I thought about moving the words to the left so that the color change would be between the "M" and the "O". I then decided to push everything to the right and make it smaller. I messed around with the moon a little bit more too. I darkened the area where the "D" overlaps the moon. I think it looks more elegant than the first one which is something that I like. Do you think that the "V" is too far away from the rest of the word vale?
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Your game's logo is good, I suppose. The sudden shift in white text to black at the left edge of the moon is a bit awkward, though. I do like the repositioned text in the second one, though.
I think the glowing white ball thing (moon?) needs more detail, too, especially if it's supposed to be a moon. Otherwise it looks like a glowing white ball thing. More contrast, perhaps?
Edit: Playing with the image in Photoshop leads me to believe that it's a circle with a rendered clouds filter. It looks flat. The purple glow in the top right makes it seem like it's an oddly shaped circle button. I suggest that you read this tutorial ( http://dinyctis.deviantart.com/art/Planet-Tutorial-3131869 ) for tips on how to make a celestial body in the sky. (I'm assuming you used Photoshop.)
Also, the "Game Masters" logo doesn't sit right with me either. There's too much activity on the left side that detracts from wanting to look at the right side. The right side looks bland, too. I suggest you use a different font, too, because that Army-type adds contrast in the letters which makes them look broken at-a-glance.
See, my original plan was to create an actual moon. (which I did in photoshop.) then I was thinking it may be a too much for the logo. I'll try finishing the logo with the moon and then I'll post it up here and show you guys.
Hello guys! I'm New! -- I've been new for a year now...haha
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Very very swanky, though i actaully like the first moon-logo since the sub-writing is bigger, but they're both brilliant with little to chose between them. Very niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!
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Neato! Did you draw that gamesplosion by hand? (
Gamesplosion... that would be a good developer name)
. I have virtually no art skill when I leave the computer.
