That does look quite nice. However you may need a more eye catching name than just "homemade games" and whats with the with the cross in the middle? Are all your games biblical or something? Its one of those random things you could just replace (or add more texture for it, its just like a white blob with the rest). But then again thats just my two cents.
I agree with the cross in the center. You might even be able to get away with a few gradient shades and such. And I defiantly agree with the name itself. It seriously under shoots the logo.
From a technical viewpoint I would suggest you simplify the wings and cross, but it's not vital if it's only to be used in games. The font, however, is fairly horrible and needs changing.
Just done a mockup of what I mean by simplification of the main visual. It uses stock images so unfortunately it would be illegal to use commercial, but should be fine for freeware.
i think the wings are fine. i dont think they need to be simplified. either both need to be as detailed as the other or as simple as the other. id love to see the cross as a detailed celtic cross. and that font needs to go.
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