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noahsummers
Registered 17/01/2010
Points 64
3rd March, 2010 at 16:18:22 -
on my t-shirt design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/63275/He_is_a_Real_Adventurer
What do you think of my suggestions listed there? Any other comments welcome.
eight bit believer
Sketchy Cornwall UKRegistered 06/11/2004
Points 1971
3rd March, 2010 at 18:47:14 -
The drawing's great, although I personally wouldn't wear a T-shirt with it on (I like bright colors & bold designs, even if it's not fashionable).
I think text would be good, but you need to try and think of something a bit catchier - I don't know what.
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Callebo Possibly Insane
Registered 10/08/2008
Points 3988
3rd March, 2010 at 19:57:01 -
How about "Link on steroids" written behind him?
...Atleast thats what Batman told me!
noahsummers
Registered 17/01/2010
Points 64
3rd March, 2010 at 20:20:57 -
Hmm, how about "Adventure calls. Will you listen?" or "Real Adventurer."
I liked "I am a real adventurer" merely because of its deadpan nature. I think it fits. Edited by noahsummers
eight bit believer
Marko I like you You like youRegistered 08/05/2008
Points 2804
3rd March, 2010 at 21:24:03 -
I like the "Link on steroids" thing too
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noahsummers
Registered 17/01/2010
Points 64
3rd March, 2010 at 21:37:34 -
Unfortunately, "Link" would be considered copyrighted content, so it probably wouldn't be able to get printed with that on it.
I've uploaded a new version; what thinkest thou? http://www.threadless.com/critique/63275/He_is_a_Real_Adventurer#v2
eight bit believer
Sketchy Cornwall UKRegistered 06/11/2004
Points 1971
3rd March, 2010 at 21:42:10 -
What's "Prithee"?
Still think you will be able to come up with something better if you give it a while...
I just made one out of my avatar It's not very good though.
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noahsummers
Registered 17/01/2010
Points 64
3rd March, 2010 at 21:49:44 -
"Prithee" is a contraction of "I pray thee," or "please." I can't yet think of a better word to replace "Hey"... Prithee works, but it'd be better to have a one syllable word.
In case anyone reading this isn't a Zelda dork, the fairy in Ocarina of Time is infamous for constantly spouting "Hey, listen!" So, this is a parody of that.
eight bit believer
Solgryn Solgryn dot orgRegistered 20/12/2008
Points 12572
6th March, 2010 at 09:23:36 -
! You made number 1337 post! Therefore, I will buy all your t-shirts..
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